No, your post starts with the implication that “the west” is not doing anything about the oppression of women in Afghanistan and doesn’t care:

The only sound you’ll hear from the west […]

To properly address the point you’re trying to make, it’s necessary to address the premise first… to begin at the beginning, as it were. If you can’t justify your premise, then your conclusion doesn’t hold water.

So what is it that you think “the west” is not doing, that it could or should be doing?